Lately and currently I am depressed...so in my depression I wrote this poem...Do read it...
In Death's Abyss
Written by Charles"Fox"Kays (1997-____)

In the moment of your prime,
in the moment you can shine,
You have your choice, yours alone
No one else, only you, may condone
this choice of life or death, happiness or sorrow
the devil asks you, your soul to borrow.

I say no, not for everything I've done, not for the devil,
You can't take back a choice in real life, everything is permanent
I bare scares unwillingly, my depression, eternal
In Death's Abyss I wallow, unwillingly, no, on my own, yes.

I then see the light, oh how I adored that light.
It's white blur welcoming and truthful
My friends on the other side welcoming and warm
I feel accepted, I feel adored.

But alas, for all my sins, my soul stays forevermore,
In Death's Abyss on the hellfire shore, however my friends, they rescue my damned soul
they pray for me and hold me close. They love me and make me feel wanted.
So who am I to deny them? I haven't the right, but I can't...I had betrayed them, lied to them, I'm nothing but a fox.
I deserve my punishment, banishment, forever and for good.
So in Death's Abyss I wallow misunderstood, but I will not break.

I do not fear Death nor Satan nor Hell. His demons can kill me, I do not care, my life is meaningless and impure,
it is not yet my time when Death comes for me, I do not fear him for I am strong and brave, but for all the things I've done I do not deserve life, and all it's gifts, no, I do not deserve this
So I wallow forever more, In Death's Abyss

Rhyme Scheme is Aa Bb Cc then it has no permanent rhyme scheme...

ok............

Shut up Jole! You don't know my sorrow because you don't know the story behind this poem! and it's private so I'm not spillin' it

Gosh you read my poem and you think I'm gonna commit suicide or that I'm crazy and you're like "Okaaaay.....?" WELL JUST READ THE DAMN POEM AND CONSIDER HOW I FU.CKIN FEEL!

Alright, one: I already know. And two: I didn't read it. :D

THEN GTFO!

you expect someone like me to read through that whole thing? maybe if you separated it into 6 comments i would have read it

Somehow it looks shorter on here

Yes it does(I posted it on FB)

Okay this version is for the "special" people(Peter)
Lately and currently I am depressed...so in my depression I wrote this poem...Do read it...
In Death's Abyss
Written by Charles"Fox"Kays (1997-____)

In the moment of your prime,
in the moment you can shine,
You have your choice, yours alone
No one else, only you, may condone
this choice of life or death, happiness or sorrow
the devil asks you, your soul to borrow.

I say no, not for everything I've done, not for the devil,
You can't take back a choice in real life, everything is permanent
I bare scares unwillingly, my depression, eternal
In Death's Abyss I wallow, unwillingly, no, on my own, ye

I then see the light, oh how I adored that light.
It's white blur welcoming and truthful
My friends on the other side welcoming and warm
I feel accepted, I feel adored.

But alas, for all my sins, my soul stays forevermore,
In Death's Abyss on the hellfire shore, however my friends, they rescue my damned soul
they pray for me and hold me close. They love me and make me feel wanted.
So who am I to deny them? I haven't the right, but I can't...I had betrayed them, lied to them, I'm nothing but a fox.
I deserve my punishment, banishment, forever and for good.
So in Death's Abyss I wallow misunderstood, but I will not break.

I do not fear Death nor Satan nor Hell. His demons can kill me, I do not care, my life is meaningless and impure,
it is not yet my time when Death comes for me, I do not fear him for I am strong and brave, but for all the things I've done I do not deserve life, and all it's gifts, no, I do not deserve this
So I wallow forever more, In Death's Abyss
Better, Peter?

how... nice

it is much easier to read win it is split up! :D

people are lazy when it comes to reading

Yes they are, I'm glad you're not, Torrey... :)
At least you and the others who've read the WHOLE thing NOT split up are not lazy...

no its not better. now it looks longer, guess i was wrong :)

BAHAHAHAHAHA!

i cant read :/

O.o...Can you read Binary Code?

How do you know how to type then?

she has a point

I guess.

Magic.

perhaps

Mindcontrol?

I personally thought that poem was amazing! (: not to be awkward but i lovee guys who write poems :P

@Peter, Damn dude make some writing into an art!

hehe AJ you know how good i am at making awesome poems :)

O.o lol, post one peter. plz

didnt i post like a crap load of songs and poems i made already?

I'll make a special song just for you Amy if you want ;)

I think you posted like three. lol. but u posted them on ur profile

I didn't know that was yours.

well that sucks for you doesnt it? and were they songs i made or just poems

My cat died, so make a peom about that, meaty Petey.

......that sounds sooo wrong but watever, i will.

it'll suck though since i've never seen your cat before and how it acts and stuff like that. its much easier and the poem will come out better if you know wat your writing about.

ik

"meaty Petey"
*falls out of seat laughing*
I'm sorry but that's just too precious!...and wrong...
If I can keep my friend, Sam, from being a jackass I'll write a poem about this girl named Autumn
Edit:MY ex friend, Sam.

They were ur parodies

oh so i didnt post up the real songs i made that were original?

No u said you wouldn't cause you didn't want them stolen

oh true true.

ok